Story Support

Bren is available for many of your screenwriting needs:

Script Consulting

Get your screenplay to the next level by working with a screenwriter with over 10 years experience.  I have collaborated on multiple scripts and currently consult as a story analyst for Act One Program and Keys2ScriptSuccess.  Now I am trying to reduce the number of pages I have to write for providing feedback.   Try one of the following:

Quick Evaluation:  $50

Many times you don't have to submit a completed project to get the analysis you really need.  Submit via email one of the following (FDR or DOC or PDF format, please):

• Your first 10 pages - you will receive a complete analysis and proofread as well as expectations and ideas for the rest of your story based on your set up.
• An expression of your whole screenplay - beginning, middle and end - in less than 2 pages*.   Choose from either a basic coverage analysis of its strengths and weaknesses, or a 1 hour phone or skype conversation that will focus on the above, plus brainstorming to take your concept to the next level.
  * NOTE:  Some people call this a "1page" which is more of a sales tool than a creative development tool.  Some call it a "synopsis" but leave out important information, like the ending.  In order to provide solid feedback, I will need to know how the story ends, surprises and all.   BTW, this is a great step for develop your story since you can see your whole story at one time.

Full Script Analysis - $250

This service provides what you may expect from Act One Program or Keys2ScriptSuccess, but without the paperwork, because we discuss your work in-depth over a 2 hour phone or skype conversation.  

Why am I doing this?  Over the past years of doing script analysis, I've learned that after crafting a strong analysis with effective story tools and ideas, I can still miss the intent of your project because what you really want to convey might not be on the page!  I have found that a substantive discussion with the writer creates a clearer opportunity to identify weaknesses and elevate your project by working with you.

Hire Bren!

I'm available for writing assignments, adaptations, and lectures.  I recently spoke at the 168 Film Festival on Unified Structure: Using Theme to Develop Character and Plot.

Mentorship.  I am an active mentor for Act One Program, so if you're wrestling through the next draft of your script, I am available for ongoing instruction for $50 per session after the initial Quick Evaluation or Full Script Analysis listed above.

Contact me with questions or to start your script elevation process.